Simple animation, but funny.
Keep it up!
Lip sync and backgrounds are getting better, that's good.
I have to agree with jonthomson, the intro and outro are too long.
Because the joke is short, I would have made the intro and outro just be a short cut.
So instead of having the beginning be 8.5 seconds long, make it something around 1.5 seconds or less.
(Just show the Final Fantasy text at normal size and then cut to the animation, that should be enough)
Aside from this, it was alright. Keep it wonderful wondermeow.
Thanks mate, I appreciate the feedback and thank you for watching all my videos so far ^^ and all the helpful comments. I will definitely keep note and keep working at it, cheers bud.
Not bad, your getting better with each one.
Keep it up.
Thanks for your feedback iceburger best score from you yet thanks for watching dude
Well, I see a little improvement.
For starters, while the background is really simple, it is cleaner than the last animation.
The humor is weak. BUT better than the minecraft animation.
Keep on practicing.
Cheers thanks for the feed back always appreciated.
Lip sync is very basic, but it works.
Backgrounds are kind of messy.
Keep trying though, work gets better over time.
Thanks mate, appreciate the feed back hope you will enjoy the next video to come.
I never knew there was a burger day, well now I know.
We haven't had a Burger Day for a few years, now that I think about it. Maybe it's time to celebrate one again.
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