Simple animation, but funny.
Keep it up!
Lip sync and backgrounds are getting better, that's good.
I have to agree with jonthomson, the intro and outro are too long.
Because the joke is short, I would have made the intro and outro just be a short cut.
So instead of having the beginning be 8.5 seconds long, make it something around 1.5 seconds or less.
(Just show the Final Fantasy text at normal size and then cut to the animation, that should be enough)
Aside from this, it was alright. Keep it wonderful wondermeow.
Thanks mate, I appreciate the feedback and thank you for watching all my videos so far ^^ and all the helpful comments. I will definitely keep note and keep working at it, cheers bud.
Not bad, your getting better with each one.
Keep it up.
Thanks for your feedback iceburger best score from you yet thanks for watching dude
This is a good example of simplicity being really effective.
It somewhat reminds me of neon race, another fun game you've made.
The graphics are really vibrant and the way everything comes out you is somewhat mesmerizing.
I'm impressed that this was all done with MS Paint.
While the game is short, it is still fun to replay to try and get a faster time.
The overlay of the game, menus and everything else fits perfectly.
Wow, what a great game!
There are a lot of upgrades, there is the skill based game for preparing the burger and the overall launching is really fun.
The backgrounds are nicely detailed, not too much clutter, a good amount.
Sound effects were not bad either and the music really suited the theme and helped create a better atmosphere.
My only complaint though, is with the rope power up thing that you can get during flight. It says that the "Indians will help you when you land". That is inaccurate and can be seen as offensive by some.
The characters portrayed do not resemble people from the country of India.
They are instead Native.
I'm not trying to be an super oppressed person, I'm just saying, that for future games, make sure you do not misuse terms and names.
Anyway, keep making awesome games.
Good song here. Happy to see you back, thought you disappeared like those other top tier artists.
Me and my friends listened to your music back before we had accounts. Spent a lotta late nights drawing and listening to your tunes. Don't know why I didn't follow or leave a review yet so I guess this is really long over due.
The stuff up until 2010 was very Adult Swim like and is very relaxing to the ears. Very good and inspirational, your tracks always deliver a strong feeling and for me and my friends it's very magical. Your songs bring good memories and really allow us to get past art blocks.
In 2016 your music sounded different. It seemed like an experimental phase as you were getting back into the swing of things. There was definitely a different atmosphere in those tracks. They moved me, honestly they did. And I truly feel that I could feel your thoughts. Kinda like the "uneasy and not sure where to go but in good standing feel". It feels as if something bad happened along the way. But these times have allowed you to develop your music even further. So if you ever doubt yourself, don't, because that year has made you better.
Once 2017 came around it seems like things are looking up. I think from here on out its gonna be good for you. Your music is evolving to another level, because you are regaining that classic Bojangles charm that everyone loves plus a little bit more (so keep experimenting and having fun with it). Its nice to hear the elements from before blend together with the new Bojangles.
Anyway just glad to see you back still with loads of inspiration. I mean that. Lots of people come back and just cant do it anymore. So its good that you've still got it.
Keep up the amazing work!
Not too bad. I like it particularly around the 1 minute mark its really SNESsy at that part so props to that.
It loops really well, not like the other cruddy loops that have a disturbing cut at the end. You know the ones. There is this massive build up and yeah it sounds good and stuff and then at the end it peters out in the worst way possible. Then it loops to the beginning and the transition is so awful that it leaves you with a feeling of irritation and a h-what the hank hill face expression.
But this is not one of those cruddy loops, its top tier. And it actually does sound like something from the SNES era, something which many people seem to strive for but never actually achieve. I think it takes skill to be able to make music especially if it is supposed to resemble a certain style. Lots of people attempt to create retro music to get on the retro train band wagon but they cant do it. They always overload chip beats and abuse midi in the wrongest of ways. I guess this is the difference between people who make music for fun and those who try and be popular just because.
Anyway, good to see you are still around man. I've read that you've been around and dealing with life and I know what that is like. The past few months have been a battle and yet there is more to go through.
So here is to the future, keep up the good work man.
I appreciate this comment. I'm glad people like you are able to understand my intentions. I'm very happy you enjoyed the composition and that my learning and practice has paid off.
Great song here, I've gotta listen to more of your stuff.
Keep up the awesome work!
Thanks so much IceBurger :) Hope you enjoy the rest of the stuff. There's plenty of it here on NG, and more to come too :D
Really good stuff here (puts my work to shame lol).
I like the shading and how the characters look life like in their motion.
Thank you kindly! :D
not bad lad your power levels are rising
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Good. Thank you.
You are definitely getting better.
The anatomy is improving and you did a decent job with the hands and face.
The abs are a little off, but not bad.
I do like the reflection but it's a perfect reflection which implies that the water isn't moving.
Seeing that there are lines of movement in the water, the reflection would be slightly distorted. The water would also flow around anything that is obstructing it's path.
Overall you did a pretty good job, keep working at it man!
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